The Big Box - part 3 "Time for Church"

Discussion in 'Fiction & Non-Fiction Stories' started by CulexPipiens, Mar 15, 2012.

  1. CulexPipiens

    CulexPipiens Still waiting for the zombies.

    A bit of inspiration on the story line and I've got part 3 done and the better part of 4 done too. Here's Part 3 to get you started.

    As always, comments good or bad are appreciated.

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  2. gypsysue

    gypsysue The wanderer

    Oh boy! Thanks, Culex! And I thought was going to get to bed early tonight... :D

    Can't wait to read it!

  3. kilagal

    kilagal Well-Known Member

    Very nicely done. Looking forward to the next part.
  4. HozayBuck

    HozayBuck Well-Known Member

    I have to say this is one damn good read!! it's even better then that..

    It's one of the best laid out and put together I've seen and there are some damn fine writers in here...

    You need to put it all together when it's done and get it published...
  5. Rain23

    Rain23 Never Quite Fit In

    Thank you, a very good read and I'll only have to work a bit longer for getting too involved in it during lunch :) Great job, can't wait to read the rest!
  6. gypsysue

    gypsysue The wanderer

    I finally crawled out from underneath my workload and got this read! Culex, it's fantastic! I loved it, and the cool thing about taking so long to get to it is that the next ones are already posted and I don't have to wait to read them! :D