JDY Fiction - When A Plan Comes Together

Discussion in 'Fiction & Non-Fiction Stories' started by Jerry D Young, Mar 4, 2010.

  1. Jerry D Young

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    "When A Plan Comes Together" by Jerry D Young Copyright 2008
     

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  2. Jerry D Young

    Jerry D Young Well-Known Member

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    JDY Fiction - Jay's Story - A Vignette

    "When A Plan Comes Together - Jay's Story - A Vignette" by Jerry D Young Copyright 2008

    A continuation of the first post
     

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  3. UncleJoe

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    That was really good. :2thumb: Thanks Jerry.
     
  4. Enchant18

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    I really enjoy your stories. Thank you for the time and effort you put into them.
     
  5. majmill

    majmill Well-Known Member

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    GREAT! Keep on writing and thanks for sharing.
     
  6. Wags

    Wags Active Member

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    good story - thanks for sharing!
     
  7. Chevy

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    GREAT story, Jerry. But... TO SHORT! LOL

    5 stars for sure. Well written.

    One thing people are going to have to learn very quickly after the big (TSHTF) one hits is to KILL people who have caused you problems like Dave did to Kathy and the kids. It is very foolish to let them live so they can ambush you later. A LOT of people are going to die learning THAT lesson. Really well written story, Jerry. Thank you.