JDY Fiction - Please! - A Vignette

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  1. Jerry D Young

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    "Please! - A Vignette" by Jerry D Young Copyright 2009
     

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  2. NaeKid

    NaeKid YourAdministrator, eh?

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    Hmm .. trying to figure out what the title has to do with the story .. can someone help me, please? :scratch
     
  3. Jerry D Young

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    Rob simply shook his head and got a better grip on the pipe rack. Even though Rob wasn’t hearing very well, the man in the truck could hear Rob when Rob replied. “No. I don’t know what to do! I just want to get out of the city! Please! Please!”


    Rob is nearly clueless and has to ask for help most of the time.
     
  4. NaeKid

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    Ahhh .. thank you!!!