JDY Fiction - Clueless

Discussion in 'Fiction & Non-Fiction Stories' started by Jerry D Young, May 10, 2011.

  1. Jerry D Young

    Jerry D Young Well-Known Member

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    "Clueless" by Jerry D Young Copyright 2011
     

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  2. gypsysue

    gypsysue The wanderer

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    Very good story, Jerry. You've showed diversity in writing, going to the other extreme from the people who have the well thought-out preps to people who have no preps and no clue what to do. I could sense how awful it would feel to, literally, be as clueless as your characters, and yet they weren't "dumb blonde"-type clueless, they were everyday people like the average american.

    Exellent writing.
     

  3. mosquitomountainman

    mosquitomountainman I invented the internet. :rofl:

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    Agree with all that GS said. Excellent story, very thought provoking.
     
  4. UncleJoe

    UncleJoe Well-Known Member

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    Yes. Very good. I know a few of those folks. I just hope they can fare as well if disaster strikes.