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Old 10-09-2017, 07:32 PM   #1
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I'd rate this one PG.

Please let me know if G would be better for any future stories.



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Old 10-09-2017, 10:13 PM   #2
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Old 10-09-2017, 10:19 PM   #3
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Ok page one down, im hooked! You have a gift! Now im goinf back to the story....

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Old 10-10-2017, 12:41 AM   #4
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Ya that was great! You tied things together nicely without giving the next step away. I liked that one a lot! Also this would make (in my opinion) a killer movie!!!

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Old 10-10-2017, 03:33 AM   #5
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Very Good! I enjoyed it.

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Old 10-11-2017, 06:16 PM   #6
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Good story although I prefer G rated. Could use a proofread for spelling and grammar but enjoyable tale.

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I'm not sure why, but when I touch the .pdf it only brings up a screen with the square image. Do I need to be a paying member to access the file?


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Bubbles I have the same problem when I access with my iPad but it comes up on my iMac. I think i5 might be a glitch in the app.


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Bugoutbob, thanks. I am using my iPhone so that's probably the problem.


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Thanks, that was fun reading. That is an original way to tie all these short stories together.




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