And yes it is necessary to use LIBTARD a lot in print, so that it becomes a dictionary entry:
Libtard : a term used to describe a left wing zealot who values Political correctness over everything else, often self centered short sighted socialist theorist who thinks corporations make gazillions of dollars no matter what and should therefore fund all of the stupid ideas that activist come up with no matter how insane or inane Copyright 2013 Tirediron
Very interesting technique to write from the gun's point of view. Another good story... Hope to see you write more and thanks for the fine entertainment. Your writing style makes me feel like I'm listening to this story sitting by the stove at the end of a hard day
Preparedness: An NSA keyword whose actual meaning is prudence, once thought to be a virtue by those with common sense.
Elaborate more! Make it into a book, not just a short story. I was hooked, but kept thinking to myself that the details weren't there. Keep it up and you've got yourself a novel!! Good job!
Thanks LazyDaisy. I wrote the first one, The Big Box, with the intent of it being a stand alone short story... however with the requests for more I decided to make a series of short stories, all building on the same theme/event. This one is obviously part 2 and as GypsySue said, part 3 is available and part 4 is almost done. When I run out of ideas and end the series I'll probably combine them all into one long story... or maybe not since each is intended to also stand on its own.